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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Oooooohhhhhh, this was AMAZING!! I love how you captured the eldritch horror elements of The Rot so perfectly in both the descriptions and imagery. There are some truly outstanding lines throughout this story.

You also did an amazing job with Sarai's character. Her cold and calculated determination came through beautifully here. I also appreciate the attention to detail, like the mention of a soul needed to power the Chronoscepter.

This was such an incredible story. I'll be shouting it out on this week's podcast for sure!

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Clara MacGauffin's avatar

thank you! It aligns a lot with my interests so it was very fun to write, it's also nice not to have to come up with the world, just being in it, like fanfiction :)

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Bradley Ramsey's avatar

Absolutely! I've done a few of these D'veen prompts where I ask writers to tell stories in my fantasy/sci-fi realm, and it's always a treat to see how others approach the lore.

This is one of my favorite ones yet!

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